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    Inactive Member crazy a's Avatar
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    no parades


    outside it rains
    on and off
    and sometimes I wake in
    the late September afternoon
    hot and dry, hungry and
    thirsty, death in my mouth
    dullness in my head
    and a buzz in my ears
    the buzz of a lawnmower
    across the street
    somewhere
    making someone look
    all-American, a buzz
    telling me to
    cut my grass
    cut my grazz
    cut my grazzzzzzzzz
    and I go into another room
    in the back of the house
    where I don't have to hear it
    and on the radio is
    some kind of music,
    it sounds like
    a parade,
    and I remember being
    asked to march in a parade
    after the Gulf War
    and I told him
    I didn't really want to,
    maybe he could get someone
    who really wanted to,
    which I guess he did because
    I never marched in a welcome-back parade
    or any parade involving anything
    and I hope I don't ever have to.

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    Inactive Member Fénix's Avatar
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    Can I ask you something? Are these poems based on slices of your life? By the way, I love this one. Just the imagery and a sense of realism. I love it. Keep them coming. Great Job.

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    "I've had to spend the majority of my life vigilant against the thoughts and emotions of others pentrating my mind. But just this once, as the psychic dam begins to burst, I dont try to stop it... because the only emotion that comes crashing through the breakwall...
    is hope.
    It washes over everyone. Infectious... growing in strength...
    Connecting us... uniting us... until suddenly...
    strangers dont seem so strange anymore."
    Jean Grey- X Men # 71

    PROUD SLAVEBOY OF JELYMO

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    Yes, a lot of the poems I'm putting out now are taken from what's happened to me.

    Thank you.

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    Way to go crazy a... I like it.

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    "Everything belongs to me because I am poor." - Jack Kerouac Visions of Cody

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    God, that's a good one, Crazy.

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    Branflakes, the ninja lesbian milk getter bunny protecting flirt.
    The one called "brain" and "brandiflakes" and....
    I'm tired of the silent majority. Silence equals death.
    Life is what you make it.
    "I believe you can't control or choose your sexuality"-Savage Garden

    When shall I hold my passion for you?

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    Those are the best kind. And it shows in what you've written.

    take care

    ---jones

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    This was a great poem,this was a elegant work of words. imu2

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    who ask how we are
    and then wait to hear the answer.
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    E. E. Cummings

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